Renlith Erceleb-The Ranger

[Sithbean]

Name:Renlith ErCeleb
Age: 21
Gender: Female
Class: Ranger
Physical appearance: Tall and lean. With a mysterious beauty. Blond hair with natural highlights about mid-back length. Blue eyes that change with moods. Ranger outfit similar to Aragorns in LOTR.
Personality: Quiet shy type but with a certain edge. A little rude and sarcastic but if you get to know me I'm fun loving and friendly. Mainly a loner because of her life style. Wise beyond most measure has done many things in her life already.
History: Has studied magic could be a Mage if she didn't go into exile. Grew up in a rich family lived a blessed life. Bestowed to someone she still doesn't know who. That's part of the reason why she left. Well trained in fighting and other arts as well.


Renlith walked across the empty street not many were out on a morning like this...and also the factor of Relquore well...my dragon that 'adopted' me. So many fear the dragon, but not in the past when they were more common.

I walked into a nearby bar. The room instantly fell silent, not even a hushed whisper was heard. I waved and sat in the back of the room. Now a few faint whispers were heard but not hardly matching the noise made previously. Before I entered I grew uncomfortable everyone was throwing sideway glances. I smiled at a few people then they returned back to there quiet conversations.

One of the barmaids hurriedly placed a piece of bread in front of me and scurried off before I could thank her. I was bored and they whispers wouldn't stop. So I walked out and the bar went back instantly to the amount of noise suiting a bar.

[Ewan]

Hm... Very nice. You are perfectly literate.

But one thing: you tend to switch between first and second person. For the RP, try to stay in 2nd. It makes things so much easier.

Approved. Now you can start roleplaying.

[Sithbean]

yeah sorry about that I tried to rewrite it but nothing quite fit it

[crossoverqueen]

If she has a dragon, she can't be a ranger, because rangers have horses and bows. She would be a Wyvern rider. Furthermore, even though dragons do form a bond with their riders, it's not very likely that a dragon would 'adopt' your character for no reason. In one of Cormag's supports, he says that dragons are hard to master, and that it took him three years to be able to even pet his own dragon.

You can't use magic if you have a dragon. Dragons are weak against magic.

Therefore, I have come up with the list of possible classes your character fits into.

Ranger
Valkyrie/Mage Knight
Wyvern Rider
Mage/Sage

The reasons your character can't fit into ANY of them:
She can't be a wyvern rider because you say she knows magic. Being a ranger, she'd probably use a bow. As I said, dragons are weak against bows and magic. The dragon would likely stay AWAY from her because it doesn't want her to kill it.

She can't be a Valkyrie, Mage Knight, Mage, or Sage because she uses weapons. She can't be a ranger because she uses MAGIC. Your character is full of contradictions.

She's also too powerful. It's weapons or magic; she can't use both.

I'm sorry if anyone is offended, and I know Ewan already accepted you, but I really don't want someone to play an all-powerful character. It would take a lot of fun out of roleplaying if characters have no good flaws.

[Ewan]

I assumed that she's a sort of wyvern knight, because of the fact that she has a dragon. True-- she can't be a ranger and a winged knight, but, because of the fact that Renlith is mainly a loner, I can understand Jedibean's reasoning of calling her a "ranger."

And since she mentioned in her post that she "could be a mage if she didn't go into exile," I also assumed that Renlith isn't a magic user and that she wields weapons.

[crossoverqueen]

Well, that clears a lot up. Thanks, Ewan.

[Ewan]

No problem.

[Sithbean]

yeah sorry for the confusion im just not to good at explain somethings

[Sithbean]

she has different aspects to her she doesnt use it much so it doesnt weaken the dragon just many things went into affect with my character I liked ranger best as a title lol